Sunday, September 13, 2009

Ello~

My type of poem! >=D

18 years ago
We met and fell in

love

3 years later
Moved to Italy

You told me to become an
artist

I followed your request

5 years later
I'm famous
Your still in collage
Searching the vast world
With only one thought

You

Wings carried me to that gate
But it wasn't open
Was there a key?

A few months later
Your heart was open
Your in my world now
Your be mine forever
In this small world

5 years later
On the floor bleeding
Was there to save?
Stupidity burned my eyes
If only I didn't see it before
You wouldn't be in that
comma
Where I laid next your bed

5 years later
There's a feeding tube
Heart is pounding slowly
I didn't quit
You told me to become an
artist

I'm famous
Your still in collage

Waiting for one day,
you'll wake me up with your smiling
face.

2 comments:

  1. A few spelling and grammar errors but over all pretty nice!

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  2. "Wings carried me to that gate
    But it wasn't open
    Was there a key?"

    I really like that part :D
    Good job ^^ I really liked it!

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