My type of poem! >=D
18 years ago
We met and fell in
love
3 years later
Moved to Italy
You told me to become an
artist
I followed your request
5 years later
I'm famous
Your still in collage
Searching the vast world
With only one thought
You
Wings carried me to that gate
But it wasn't open
Was there a key?
A few months later
Your heart was open
Your in my world now
Your be mine forever
In this small world
5 years later
On the floor bleeding
Was there to save?
Stupidity burned my eyes
If only I didn't see it before
You wouldn't be in that
comma
Where I laid next your bed
5 years later
There's a feeding tube
Heart is pounding slowly
I didn't quit
You told me to become an
artist
I'm famous
Your still in collage
Waiting for one day,
you'll wake me up with your smiling
face.
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A few spelling and grammar errors but over all pretty nice!
ReplyDelete"Wings carried me to that gate
ReplyDeleteBut it wasn't open
Was there a key?"
I really like that part :D
Good job ^^ I really liked it!